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Friday, 29 May 2020

The dinosaur escape

The dinosaur escape
Tim started driving away in the jeep. More T-Rex`s joined the chase. The dinosaurs started chomping at the back of the jeep, one of them got the jeep and threw it up in the air and bit Tim's leg off. They started circling around Tim. Tim tried crawling away but the dinosaurs keeped dragging him back with there claws!. Tim managed to get into the sewes and closed the lid. He follow the sewer until the dinosaurs found the sewer and went in the exit they started run after him. They let out a massive roar Tim heard them so he crawled the anther way out of the sewer and found another jeep and drove away. Mean while the dinosaur were looking for Tim they could smell his blood. Tim was out of there. He found some food at a farm he would stay there until the dinosaurs came back.




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1 comment:

  1. Hi gus
    Your story is really good and I like it. This reminds me of when I saw a big jeep on the side of the road. Maybe next time add some more information at the start.

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