He knew he had crashed into a jungle,and there were lots of animals out there. As he laid there, he heard a sound that he had heard before, he jumped to his feet and stared to run. There was a honkapotimus coming for him.
He was still runing as he stumbled over a hornet nest, he had a big fight on his hands, he defened himself with a stick he had found on the ground swating them away. He managed to escape without getting stung. And he stared runing again, because the honkapotimus was still on his tall.
He had also woken up the potocroc, half hippaotamas and half croc, now all the animals were after him. He fell into a kiwis burrow. who pecked Lawrence savagle on the bum, he sremed and run out. He was out of breath so he when he stoped to get his breath back all the animals stoped chasing him. They just wanted to be his friends.
Lawrence had an idear, he could use them to ride out of the jungle and see his famliy. He could vsit the animals every now and then to feed them some food. They thougt he was a hero and everybody lived happily ever after. The end.
Hi Fergus. I liked your story. but give more info.
ReplyDeleteHi Fergus i’m Leon . I think This is a really good peace if writing.
ReplyDeleteI’ve done some writing like this last year.
Maybe next time you should read through your story again because I saw some spelling mistake.