Being big is amazing because you can climb mountains, and get to places really quickly. He has been like this all his life. One day John the big dude found a friend, he took that friend on an adventure into a jungle up a tree, to see the sun set. The next day they went to an amusement park, the friend went on the roller coster “he said that was so fun”. Then they went to Johns house, it was massive, his friend looked like an ant in it. John had a mousehole, he thought his friend could make his home in it. In the morning, John checked up on his friend, John said “how was your sleep”, the friend said “it was good”. So John cooked him some food. And everybody lived happily ever after. The end
Monday, 18 May 2020
Being Big
Being Big
Being big is amazing because you can climb mountains, and get to places really quickly. He has been like this all his life. One day John the big dude found a friend, he took that friend on an adventure into a jungle up a tree, to see the sun set. The next day they went to an amusement park, the friend went on the roller coster “he said that was so fun”. Then they went to Johns house, it was massive, his friend looked like an ant in it. John had a mousehole, he thought his friend could make his home in it. In the morning, John checked up on his friend, John said “how was your sleep”, the friend said “it was good”. So John cooked him some food. And everybody lived happily ever after. The end
Being big is amazing because you can climb mountains, and get to places really quickly. He has been like this all his life. One day John the big dude found a friend, he took that friend on an adventure into a jungle up a tree, to see the sun set. The next day they went to an amusement park, the friend went on the roller coster “he said that was so fun”. Then they went to Johns house, it was massive, his friend looked like an ant in it. John had a mousehole, he thought his friend could make his home in it. In the morning, John checked up on his friend, John said “how was your sleep”, the friend said “it was good”. So John cooked him some food. And everybody lived happily ever after. The end
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Hi Fergus i’m Lilley D I like your story it’s really creative I like the ideas in it! I like the names but I didn’t get the friends name.I realized you said John a lot, I suggest you explain the characters better and the backgrounds.
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