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Monday, 6 September 2021

LifeCycle Of The Longfin Eel

 The eggs start of at sea then they hatch into larvae witch are leaf shaped and they float on the sea current

 when they are on the journey they grow in to glass eels which are see through and skinny when they are at freshwater after a while they grow into elvers

Elvers  can climb waterfalls for a short period of time at once then they grow into adult eels 

Adult eels they spend most of there life before go back to the sea to lay eggs


2 comments:

  1. Fergus, you have written about all the stages in the life cycle of tuna. They are truly amazing creatures don't you think? Proofread your work carefully, checking spelling (especially for those tricky words like witch/which) and always, always put full stops at the end of your sentences.

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  2. Hello Fergus
    You have done quite a great job. Checking your full stops might help. Overall, I see you have improved your writing since the last time I have seen your writing in Holes.
    Wendy

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